Double-Post: I added more to the plot now, and this time, I have explained how I am re-introducing the 88 constellations as I did in the earlier build of the story.
Related stuff:
1. 2 weeks ago, after browsing through the first ever 2100-related thread (writing down names of every SP character on my master-list), I just found out about Kevin's Bongronian zombies lol. After reading his short-written backstory, I think I'm adding Bongra City as one of the fictional "Outside World" cities, and better yet, have one of the 88 constellations as the fallen city's main tower. Link to where I got the whole thing:
http://www.smashpower.com/forums/index.php/topic,1048.msg55234.html#msg55234OK, technically-speaking, it doesn't quite say there's a name for the village mentioned, but I can assume, right? Heavily implied anyhow
I think one day, as I write the story, I'll re-write the short-biographies of every character I introduce along the way. Kevin's character should be a lot of fun to work with seeing as how I have a lot of good resources to flesh him out. Same goes for the likes of Basileus (Noah's character) and Goryan's (Ryan's character)
2. Yeah, I just started writing 2100 all over again, yesterday. It's only a prologue for now so I might ask you, Bobby or DJ, how I should appropriately format the pages. I'm trying to imitate book pages, but I don't know how large the gaps are supposed to be
A little feedback on the writing would be nice too, but I'd rather finish the whole thing first before I get any full review on the writing itself.
