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« on: December 05, 2010, 06:44:04 PM »

So, on the way home from my Youth group, I had an idea... the current name is Grix.  Grix I think are going to be evil creatures who seek the destuction of the Initi, or Initon, who have liquids within them.  When an individual of these species who is unique/special dies, 2 juices spill out.  One is a deep purple, and the other is a Pink-redish combination.  The purple is actually good, and the dark redish-pink is bad.  As the liquids ooze from their pores, they clash and battle.  Whomever wins determines  the fate and siding of the Zibitox who are created afterwards.  If the redish-pink stuff wins, the Zibtox is lured into doing evil deeds and committing felonies and trying to conquer the world, while if the purple wins, it will be drawn more to being a help to society and saving people in need. 

Now, in the Age of Tidings, the Zibitox are the primary lifeforms, and the Initi race are rapidly declining in numbers.  Then one day, a new Inti; Eldridge Leverance is born, and said to be the one to start the Age of Ignition, the one foretold of in legends where the Initi will once again reign, but alongside the Zibitox.  But then one fateful day, he died.  The 2 liquids flowed out, and the strangest thing happened.  They fought for just a second, but the they stopped, as if hearing important news.  As if old friends from a past life, they greeted each and mixed.  And Eldridge wasn't like the other Zibitox.  He was both and evil.  he had the power to decide. 

And thats the basic jist of it... I like the concept, people oozing out good and evil as if it were blood, and then being reborn into a predetermined figure, but one of them turning out different.
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« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2010, 07:57:22 PM »

This is for a story of yours, I take it?
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« Reply #2 on: December 06, 2010, 04:32:53 AM »

well, I was thinking of making a story, actually... Though I'm wondering if I could include something like this into 2100?  The Initi and the Zibitox could be races/species, and Eldridge could be a character of mine, though I would him powers... still thinking about that.  But, yes, I was considering writing a story.  Damn, I just have so many story ideas and no time to implement them.
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« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2010, 09:28:36 AM »

I would like to see more of this.
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« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2010, 02:16:51 PM »

I would like to see more of this.
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« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2010, 04:33:59 PM »

This would make for an excellent sci-fi story, Henry. Get facebook! We must talk there!

Also, I recommend you keep this original. Even though anything at this point fits in 2100 since it's multi-genre, I don't want to hog all the ideas away. I say you make your own story. We're gonna run out of them in the future and get stuck with cartoon re-runs and rebooted games/comics anyway Wink

What intrigues me are the liquids that clash. They have such a proton/electron relationship with each other that it seems like one "repels" chaos while the other "attracts" it. If you know what I mean that is...
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« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2010, 03:58:17 AM »

I have facebook, but I can't go on for a while.... maybe during Christmas break.  Although if you really want to, I have a random duplicate account called Guy Amon, which has like no info on it... Tongue

Yay!  yeah, I think this would be an interesting anime (not really, but the term "anime" has more of a teenage feel to it) or manga/comic book!  I would pretty much have to set it up as a book first, and I cannot draw!! Sad  And thanks, keeping ideas to myself is always nice! Cheesy

I think I know what you mean... it might be something where like the liquids change shape and have all kinds of special properties... I was thinking maybe turned into Greek gods/heros, and kill each other that way... like for instance: Bellerophon slayed the Chimera, right?   well, if the purple was Bellerophon, and the redish-pink was the Chimera, then the purple would most likely win. (unless the red-pink is sneaky)  And yes, in fact the do pretty much have a attract and repel relationship!
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« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2010, 06:11:40 AM »

Wow, this sounds awesome!
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