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« on: April 11, 2010, 03:33:22 PM »

FINALLY!!!!  After four hours of typing up this LONG-ASS synopsis, I- baaaaah, just read it if you want to know where 2100 is right now... (btw, Sine Recleoura is a Drocon.  He is Shikon's replacement).

The Legend of Legends:  The Chronicles Untold

          The Chronicles of 2100 is an epic about a series of events that occur throughout History.  In History, a land kept divided from the unknowing human beings known as Luigio is forged by an omnipotent being named Sine Recleoura.  God-like and powerful with millions of followers kissing at his divine feet, Sine creates the first ever "America" for non-humans and mythical beings alike.  Attempting to idealize this land for superior immortals, Sine turns his attention to four young children from the Untold Realm.   These four children whose origins are unknown are brought by Sine to cultivate and create an Eden for non-humans.  These four children start four different clans, minus one, who, happens to watch everything around him for being at such a young age.  Luigio is a land where those who step unto and are born within embrace eternity under Sine's benevolence.  Acroneos Drakontas Chronicle of the Chronicle Clan and the Chronicans (or "SoulGears"), Tsukiyomi Raykaru of the Raykaru Clan and the Raykarans, and Randolph Von Yŷver of the Yŷverians.  Their fourth-ally, Daen Kidate, the youngest of the four-founding members of Luigio, has no clan of his own.   Acroneos, Tsukiyomi, Randolph, and Daen all sign a contract stating the following: 

  • The Four Arch-Lords-which we are given our unique qualities-shall preserve our eternal essence through our future remnants.  Our spouses and our wives will carry our children as we will carry theirs.  Never shall an Arch-Lord or a descendant of an Arch- Lord marry his or her own neighboring companion, whom, if an Arch-Lord engages with an Arch-Lord (or their descendants), our contract of Eternal Friendship is forever shattered.  May we live with this code and remain Red, Blue, Yellow, and Black, as we the Arch-Lords shall forever rein eternal supremacy over the great lands of Luigio. – Chronicle 15:21 "Chronicles of Luigio"

          As Sine's apprentices, the four Arch-Lords follow his rule to create Luigio by first starting each of their clans.  Acroneos and Randolph each find their own wives while Tsukiyomi finds a husband.   When each of them starts their own clans, over the course of the years, they discover a verse/passage by Sine that not only surprises them, but shocks them as well:
 
  • The World, a place with creatures swaying under grass; the Earth, a place where Eden was once known; Eden, a place where we have come from; coming from, we are from Eden.  This world, imperfect, shall meet its end on Judgment Day.  The day we reclaim Planet Eden, the Earth shall crumble along with its Sinners and its Humans.  When we finally come to Eden, the World shall be no more – Recleoura 3:16 "Starlight Prophecies"

Angered by the passage written by Sine, the Arch-Lords taken action and convert their midair fortress into a Librarium.  This Librarium, built by the most advanced magic ever conceived, becomes the first architecture built of both science and sorcery alike.  When their childhood playground becomes a massive Deus Machina (Machine God), they plan to finish the structure in hopes to escape the Rapture when Sine declares Judgment Day.
 
          When Sine discovers their rebellion, he tries to recruit their youngest member, Daen Kidate, and promises him eternal power and the ownership of his own Hell.  Meanwhile, Acroneos meets a Princess from the "Outside" who takes an interest in him and his Arch-Lord allies.  Acroneos and this Princess befriend each other and the Princess decides to assist in the Librarium project by finishing the architecture.  Infuriated, Daen becomes "ENVIOUS" of Acroneos' sudden friendship with this mysterious woman.  Lately, he becomes obsessed and tries to "PRIDE" himself around Acroneos to gain attention from him, to no avail.  Annoyed rather, Acroneos tells Daen to ward off and give him space.  "CORRUPTED", Daen one night enters the Librarium (unfinished) and creates time-coordinates that lead to the "First Crimson Moon event" of the past.
 
          When the Princess reveals her dreaded curse, the other three Arch-Lords discover that she comes from the most advanced Vampire-race in the world.  However, hesitant to write "Outside" history, Sine refuses to keep information of her name, her clan, and her reputation within Luigio, thus, the Princess' name and origin remains a mystery.  By messing with the Libarium, Daen makes the entire palace disappear in the past thus starting the first-ever "Paradox Loop."  Daen laughs nonchalantly and turns his attention to Sine for power.  "GREEDY" for his own "Eden" and ready to take it into his own hands, Daen officially joins alongside Sine to obtain this power and to overthrow the Arch-Lords and their newest ally, the Princess.
 
          However, after discovering she has her own matters to attend to, they frown upon her early dismissal, but not before Acroneos makes her an honorary Arch-Lord.  Laughable enough, Daen barely contributed to the Library project in the first-place, thus showing his deep sense of "SLOTH".  Angered with Daen's betrayal, Acroneos focuses on Daen when they reencounter.  The three-remaining Arch-Lords, Acroneous, Tsukiyomi, and Randolph all start their own group known as the "WarCRY" group (with each capital letter being the first letter of their last names), and challenge Sine for the right of the land, rebelling and claiming that destroying Earth was "Evil" enough in their eyes.  With each of their mighty blades, "Luvanta Suprannia (Luigian for "Supreme Star"), "Igakan Tempasia" (Luigian for "Tempest Moon"), and "Iocuaro Relanpago" (Luigian for "Raging Jupiter), the WarCRY group stand together against Sine.  Unsurprised, Sine accepts their courageous efforts to stop him from executing his doomsday plan, and Daen assists Sine in order to make his goals come true.

          After a long and treacherous battle, Daen successfully kills off Acroneos and emerges victorious.  Tsukiyomi dies and becomes one with the Librarium.  Randolph survives the ordeal and is turned into Rudolph (the same Reindeer of the Saint Nicholas stories) by Sine.  Acroneos' soul wanders the Earth, looking for the Ultimate SoulGear Descendant in order to "complete" the Librarium.  Randolph loses his memories and only remembers himself as the childhood legend, Rudolph the Red-nosed Reindeer.  Furthermore, the red-nose is a side-effect created by Daen, known as the "Red-Mark."

          The Mark would restrict its victim's power in place of Daen's.  Already owning his own Hell-spot, Daen sends out demonic insects all over the world known as "Blood Locusts" which travel the world devouring the souls of the innocent to gain power.  However, due to Sine's incomplete "promise," Daen is stripped of the power Sine gave him, thus furthering the intention to gain power by devouring souls with these Locusts.

          As for Tsukiyomi, filled with anger, her enraged spirit wanders the Librarium, ready to kill those who discover its whereabouts.  The Crimson Moon incidents that occur, stirring the bloodlust within Vampires and Nocturnal beings alike (all influenced by the moon), all trace back to the Librarium.  Tsukiyomi's involvement with the Crimson Moon incidents is because of her role as the "Guardian of the Moon."   Victimized by the same curse Vampires suffer under every Crimson Moon, the Librarium becomes crimson-red and Tsukiyomi screams within the corridors of the massive Deus Machina.

          When Sine wins the battle with Daen and defeats the WarCRY group, Sine creates two weapons-one scythe and one blade, known as Quilla & Inti respectively (Quilla, representing the Moon, and Inti, representing the Sun).  Satisfied with his new position in power as the Messiah of Luigio, Sine begins the creation of the land by creating its rivers, lakes, grass, trees, and animals as a gift for all the descendants of the Arch-Lords.  Merciful, he spares the clan-descendants, but Daen has other plans.

          Daen tells every single one of the WarCRY relatives that their "loss" was simply due to their inability to cooperate, and that Daen tried all that he can to make Luigio and the "world a better place." Creating this horrible white-lie, the clans begin to question and each other, and without Acroneos', Tsukiyomi's, or Randolph's guidance, the clans fight each other in a battle known as the "Great Luigian War."  To this very day, Luigio earns the name of the first two letters of each of the legendary weapons wielded by WarCRY, hence LUvanta, IGakan, and IOcuaro.  As for their Librarium, it is christened "Vantaakan-Cuaro."
Centuries later, the war ends with an Admiral named Modie Raykaru, who ends the war by killing off every single Chronican after reading stories of "Acroneos' supposed failure" to protect Tsukiyomi from her fate.  Acroneos, the "Guardian of the Sun," searches for a descendant that would complete the Librarium and upon his search; he finds a descendant named "Rodney Chronicle."  Discovering that Rodney is the last-surviving Chronican, Acroneos keeps a sharp-eye on Rodney's foster-father Modie, who adopted an abandoned infant Rodney.  Despite Rodney being Modie's "enemy," he raises him regardless.  Relieved that Rodney is powerful enough, Acroneos follows Rodney so that he may approach him one day in-spirit and convince him to enter the Librarium and finish the work Acroneos could not. 

          The work Acroneos could not complete is the reason the Librarium suffers Crimson Moon incidents.  The piece missing to complete the architecture is in actuality the Heart of a SoulGear.  Before he could sacrifice his own Heart in the past to complete the Librarium, he is thwarted off by Daen and Sine in their previous battle.  As such, the Librarium suffers from its "constant overheating" without a "Heart" to temper it.

          When Rodney reaches phenomenal power and Kingship rule over Luigio, (similar to that of Acroneos at age 12), Daen finally decides to confront Rodney in hopes of taking his Kingdom away.  Acroneos, determined to get revenge on Daen, can only watch helplessly, but what really infuriates this Veteran Arch-Lord is not Daen's reckless challenge, but Rodney's commitment to his wife.  Instead of being proud of his descendant, Acroneos discovers that Rodney is engaged with another Arch-Lord descendant, hence shattering the contract Acroneos forged centuries ago.  Rodney Chronicle, in love and engaged with Queen Harusame Raykaru (who feels the same about Rodney), become the first two Arch-Lord descendants in history to break the 15:21 passage written by Acroneos and the Arch-Lords.  Over time however, the interracial relationship between Rodney and Harusame grows in Acroneos, and his attention turns back to Modie.  Acroneos discovers that Modie has secretly arranged a fight between Daen and Rodney in fear that Rodney would surpass the veteran admiral.

          When Daen confronts Rodney however, he remembers Acroneos.  His problem with Rodney stirs a sudden feeling of "WRATH" upon him, as well as untold "GLUTTONY" for more power.  Motivated to take away Rodney's kingdom, Daen's heart is filled with "LUST," threatening to rape Rodney's wife.  When Rodney and Daen fight, Rodney is able to go head-to-toe against Daen, but Daen uses the power of his Hell-ground known as "Lucifer's Garden" to bring Rodney's fears to life.  A cruel opportunist and a horrible sportsman, Daen slices Rodney in half, and declares victory against the Chronican descendant, or so it seems.  As soon as Daen kills Rodney, Rodney resorts to a last-second attempt to bringing Daen down along with him.  Rodney uses his SoulGear powers and activates his Heart's energy, exploding and destroying Daen in the process, ending their battle in a tie.

          Never able to actually take over the kingdom, Daen is confined to Lucifer's Garden, relying on his Locusts to corrupt powerful beings with weak hearts in order to gain his physical form once more.  Harusame becomes the perfect candidate as soon as Modie informs her that Rodney had died (again, the white-lie Daen had told centuries ago, but slightly different).  Telling her that Rodney left her out of boredom (lies), Harusame (pregnant at the time), is enraged and Modie leaves the room.  Feeling heartbroken, Harusame gives birth during her raging moment, but not before she makes a supernatural deal with Daen (in-spirit).  Daen offers her the power to get revenge on Rodney's soul, and without her knowing who Daen is, she accepts and becomes the omnipotent and ever powerful Deathgoddess, Kinyou Raykaru.

          Feeling victorious at last, Modie reminisces in the end of the Chronicans, his enemy-clan, and leaves without a care in the world that his niece, Harusame, has fallen into darkness.  Several decades pass by with no Chronicans around.  The humans are killed by Sine Recleoura's followers, the non-humans become the new dominant Earthlings, and a whole new war begins between the "Terrans" and the "Drocons."   Attempting to take over the world, Sine secretly watches as his people slowly destroy the Terrans.  As a last-attempt to battle Sine and his forces, Acroneos returns to the Librarium and somehow manages to activate the Planetarium room.  The Constellations displayed come to life and the stars explode (literally), transferring their energy unto 88 different children, thus creating the "Chapters."  These Chapters were to prevent Sine and his followers from having their wishes granted of claiming Earth.  On the other hand, Sine and Daen reunite together to recruit 16 different beings out of the 88 known as the <i>“Arch-Actors,”</i> their darker counterparts the <i>"Arch-Fiends,"</i> and the <i>“Arch-Angels.”</i>    The Arch-Actors are children who are born of the 8 Deadly Sins, and the Arch-Angels are born of the 8 Heavenly Virtues.  According to Sine, these children would repopulate the world after Judgment Day.  However, a determined Acroneos still wanders around the world in-search for the rumor of the "Last Human on Earth."  That last human, that boy, is non-other than Rodney's reincarnation and grandson:  Karoku Hasu A.K.A. Neos Drakontas Chronicle.  Karoku, the main-hero and the last-surviving Human in the war, the epic, the tale, and The Chronicles of 2100, will unite with his non-human allies and the Chapters to uncover the truth behind Earth and to uncover his own purpose in life in a dystopia where humans are "no more."  And with every Chapter....... "A story unfolds...."
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« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 07:18:58 PM »

Quite honestly, if someone could code the document and send it to me with the intended italics, bold, and underlining, I would much appreciate it (so I can post everything here).
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« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 07:25:11 PM »

Right now the document is a .txt file. I think it needs to be a .doc for it to come up correctly.
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« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 07:33:59 PM »

Right now the document is a .txt file. I think it needs to be a .doc for it to come up correctly.

I can't save it as a doc. with MicrosoftWord for some reason :\

I'll just send it over on Skype, k? Tongue Tongue Tongue
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« Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 07:49:11 AM »

I made it into a Word 03 File [ATTACHED]. I'd help but I don't understand what needs italicising, what needs bolding, etc.
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« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 09:15:05 AM »

I made it into a Word 03 File [ATTACHED]. I'd help but I don't understand what needs italicising, what needs bolding, etc.

If the italics and bold doesn't show in the original file then that's a problem.  Alberto submitted the plot-line in dA luckily so I managed to get it coded there.  I'm still awaiting Bobby's Smashpower version of the coding.
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« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 09:23:28 AM »

I would code it for you, but I don't know where I'm supposed to put boldness or italics, because the whole thing shows up as bold for me.
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« Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 09:43:08 AM »

I would code it for you, but I don't know where I'm supposed to put boldness or italics, because the whole thing shows up as bold for me.

O_o I see, I'll do something about it though... Thanks for letting me know.
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« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 11:51:43 AM »

Alberto submitted the plot-line in dA luckily so I managed to get it coded there.  I'm still awaiting Bobby's Smashpower version of the coding.

Done.
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« Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 12:48:58 PM »

Done.

Thanks!

Look up!  I finally finished posting it!  Thanks Bobby!
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« Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 12:59:49 PM »

Awesome. This is a very well done narration. It's very informative and puts the pieces together quite nicely.

I'm curious about the Luigian language. Is it Latin? Also, you've established the origin of the Chapters, Arch-Actors, and Arch-Fiends - do you have any ideas as to the origins of the Arch-Angels?
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« Reply #11 on: April 12, 2010, 01:29:33 PM »

wow, very interesting!

can't wait to hear/learn more!
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« Reply #12 on: April 12, 2010, 01:39:17 PM »

Awesome. This is a very well done narration. It's very informative and puts the pieces together quite nicely.

I'm curious about the Luigian language. Is it Latin? Also, you've established the origin of the Chapters, Arch-Actors, and Arch-Fiends - do you have any ideas as to the origins of the Arch-Angels?

There will be an overview of them when I write both Sine's profile and the Acroneos' as well.  Acroneos is the one who gave the Chapters their importance, while Sine seeks the Arch-Actors and Arch-Angels as potential beings worthy enough to live on after the Rapture and repopulate in a new Eden.  The Arch-Fiends is Daen's response to Sine in attempts to killing the 3 main clan members (Karoku, Kohaku, and Earnest), as well as the descendant (Aurelia) of his "replacement."  Since Sine could not promise Daen that eternal power he was offered in the past, Daen is kind of working solo.  The Hades of 2100 if you will.

As for Luigians, their language is somewhat similar to Latin, but with an Asian mix (although some Asian-influenced words are a bit of a rarity).  Most words are entirely made up.  Luvanta for one has several meanings:  Star, Lamp, Light, Awake, Awaken ("Levanta" in Spanish-form; notice the similarity), Shine, Bright, etc.
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« Reply #13 on: April 12, 2010, 04:58:31 PM »

* 0blivionJack claps at end of story

Again again! =P Yay! Nice job Juan!
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« Reply #14 on: April 12, 2010, 05:20:41 PM »

* 0blivionJack claps at end of story

Again again! =P Yay! Nice job Juan!
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