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Author Topic: The Game Dimension - Episode 1: The portal  (Read 367 times)
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« on: January 08, 2010, 02:55:11 PM »

The first episode is finally here!!

sorry it took so long guys, i've been having problems with the damn editing program and uploading it to youtube



im nearly done with the second episode too, so stay tuned  Grin

and btw thats me a year ago when i had my hair Tongue
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« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2010, 03:26:07 PM »

yay!

I liked the beginning with the text part with the music (did you guys make that beginning music, or else where did you get it from?), although the 2-4 black-outs during that part were annoying.

with the actual live part, it was...weird.  Good acting by whoever played that guy (and btw, did that clock go backwards at some point?  or was that just me?)  It was a bit on the slow side for me and seemed to only give information to what you gave at the beginning.  (awesome dimension portal btw  Wink!)

well, that is all for now!

MY VERDICT: Beginning text part was informative and intriguing, while the live part, while from what can be seen is acted well, is a little slow and only gives information that's already known.  So basically, it's a Noah movie SO YOU BETTER WATCH IT OR ELSE  Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry!
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« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 10:01:09 PM »

Yeah, it was good. Good work! The intro music was perfect and I liked the portal imaging. The only areas I could see improving as you go on would be length - the scientist working on the portal stretched out longer than is ideal, I think.

Maybe add some sound effects?

I'm looking forward to the next episode! Hurry it up!
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« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2010, 10:08:51 PM »

I like where this is going! 
It confused me a bit that you explained everything and then showed it.
And the scene was a bit lengthy.
Still looks pretty cool though.
I look forward to the next episode!
And the next!
And the next.
...And the next.
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« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2010, 08:38:52 PM »

Haha. Pretty cool Noah.  Grin
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