If you were a Hero (here or outside), who (or make one up), would u be?

[dcmjlive]

Juan, have you ever considered removing the shading out of your drawings first and putting them in with the coloring? I think it makes the picture cleaner. It's just my opinion.

[Karoku (2100)©]

Juan, have you ever considered removing the shading out of your drawings first and putting them in with the coloring? I think it makes the picture cleaner. It's just my opinion.

From a view, yes it does.  I'd try it but I suck at coloring, that's the problem

I'd rather ask someone who's good at that.  I mean seriously!  I tried editting this banner here to it's best and all it looks like is a blurred stained-glass of a banner, ya know?

But yeah, I get ya, though I won't being doing it any soon.  I'd rather Tot do it for me, lol jk

[Rad]

Malin.  I finished drawing Ariel during Study Hall .  I'll scan her today and get her profile done.  This means that Bobby's character is next.

Oh my gosh! Do you need any other information first? You know, like character habits, energy-weapon tactics....or stances? I could probably cook something up today for you...

[dcmjlive]

I'd rather ask someone who's good at that.  I mean seriously!  I tried editting this banner here to it's best and all it looks like is a blurred stained-glass of a banner, ya know?

I get ya. Have you taken any sketching classes? Maybe you can put everything to light shade, then use a darker pen to get the outlines. That way, your pics would be cleaner. Then, let someone like Malin do the coloring for you.

[Karoku (2100)©]

I get ya. Have you taken any sketching classes? Maybe you can put everything to light shade, then use a darker pen to get the outlines. That way, your pics would be cleaner. Then, let someone like Malin do the coloring for you.

Good idea DJ!  But the part about Malin coloring is harder.  It's not that simple.  I know I heard a way t do it (easier said than done though) but I don't remember where.  I see what you mean, I wish I could clean it myself but I'm not that resourceful.

You're looking at the only artist without Photoshop

[dcmjlive]

Good idea DJ!  But the part about Malin coloring is harder.  It's not that simple.  I know I heard a way t do it (easier said than done though) but I don't remember where.  I see what you mean, I wish I could clean it myself but I'm not that resourceful.

You're looking at the only artist without Photoshop

You don't need photoshop. In other words, sketch in pencil lightly. When you're satisfied, pick out the lines with a tech pen or a special sketch pen. (Or even a paintbrush if you know how to use lineweight with it.) Then erase all pencil lines with a good eraser. Then it's ready for scanning. Put it in any program that lets you adjust brightness and contrast. Clean it up using that. And you're set!

[Karoku (2100)©]

(SIGHHHHHHHHH) here we go again.... Another summary to further explain the whole concept and synophisis of my story (and fortunately, for DJ to critize some more, no offense):

Definition:

-Life is full of wonders and secrets just kept away from all it's seekers in where there are things just not meant for mortal eyes.  Humans, extraterrestials, organisms, and thoughts of all kinds all live apart to avoid conflict.  Their leader, Zeus, the King of the entire universe, has maintained order throughout the entire void.  Throughout millenias on the Planet Earth, we have believed there was such an entity as Zeus, big and small.  However, not all was so simple.  Every human being had a different view of our creator, even outsiders saw him in a different way, otherwise.  Zeus, however, does not just play a major role in our existence, but so does the popular Messaih, Jesus (or Akira, in Japan).  Each of us contain a piece and a portion of Akira's soul.  We are all the building blocks of Akira and Zeus, which gives birth to our thoughts and emotions.  This is due to the inferiority of our complex, and we are granted with these abilities otherwise.  That's when things get out of hand...

Synopsis:

-Humans were always remarked as "stupid, savage, aggressive, adaptable yet destructive, violent, brutal, and stubborn."  However, it is also thanks to them "we are here." The secrets kept hidden by Zeus and Akira are non-other than Luigio (Lui-she-o), the continent invisible to the human/animal eye.  It was a heaven to all things mythical, born from the combined aura of each and every human (this narrows Dragons and Yetis down to one area, just one).  However it was considered, it was too a place of discord, much to the invention of good/evil by man; they cannot survive without human-meaning (whom invented yin-yang).  Luigio was too populated by Lucifer and his minions from Hell (Tartarus), and have caused much trouble throughout the centuries.  That is why Zeus created (himself) a special breed of human beings known as "Chapters."  Each Chapter has their own story to accomplish in life, and make a living to protect the humans and Luigio without conflict.  These Chapters are Demi-Gods (Half-human/half-gods) based on the constellations we see up there in space (viewed as heaven from above).  However the fact that Chapters had to protect Earth from it's own problems, soon after, it made new enemies from the outside.  It was time to come out of hiding, for good...

Plot:

-For years and years, there have been countless battles, till then.  Between the years of 2014-2100, have come an alien race of great ambition to control the power of the Chapters and seek the destruction of the universe (or rather, dictate in the form of tyranny).  Drocons, their name.  Discord, is their game...  In the year 2100, there was a young (but spiritually old) Chapter named Karoku Hasu (The Dragon Spirit; Draco) who has started a journey to finding his brothers and sisters and try to fit in with the now tempting humans (who deem no respect to his kind).  His predator, Shikon Anison, is a Titan from Drocon Prime and seeks him and his bretherin and sisterin to become whole (knowing he could not take Zeus on for the throne of the universe).
Besides the fact Zeus was not allowed (by universal law) to let his children come out and confront the human world in this new frontier, this did not stop Lucifer from doing the same.  Zeus and Akira knew that Shikon was no mere threat, but a true force to be reckoned with, and interfereing will only put every human in a state of awe.  This is an issue held high above it's standards, and the only one to make a difference (with help of his soul-siblings), is Karoku Hasu...

More on the story will come later on to further explain what is going on...

[dcmjlive]

(SIGHHHHHHHHH) here we go again.... Another summary to further explain the whole concept and synophisis of my story (and fortunately, for DJ to critize some more, no offense):

It's art...constructive criticism helps to improve your craft. But don't worry, I just need to tell you that the word is synopsis not synophisis. You might tell that to your English teacher and embarrass yourself...

[BewareOfUmbrella]

Just an idea I had.  Random inspiration.  Use it, abuse it, ignore it at your lesiure.

-Name:  Micheal Roderick
-Social:  The Fallen Knight
-Professional:  Unwilling servant of Evil
-Combat:  Heavy mounted swordsmanship.
-Personality:  Humorless, morose, grim
-Position/side:  Evil
-Nationality:  German
-True Origin:  Medieval Germany
-Sex:  Male
-Orientation:  Straight
-Relationships:  None still living
-Avatar: 
-Weapon:  Corrupted Blade of the Heavens
-Species:  Undead human
-Favorite food:  N/A; liked pork when alive.
-Favorite Hobby:  Chess (although he's not good at it)
-Dislikes:  Oath-breakers, liars, cheaters, cowards
-Goal:  Find a holy warrior worthy of slaying him and freeing his soul.
-Destined Battle:  (Pick a suitably holy warrior)
-Age:  About 700
-Powers:  Regeneration, causing fear
-Stats: 
  -Knowledge: (4/5)
  -Power: (Prime)
  -Energy: (Prime)
  -Stamina: (Prime)
  -Charisma: (1/5)
  -Dexterity: (2/5)
  -Speed: (4/5)
  -Reaction: (Prime)
  -Resistance: (Prime)
  -Timing: (3/5)
  -Reflexes: (2/5)
  -Emotional Reactions/aftermath: (Prime)
Unless I miscalculated, the stats exactly match your own; he is a very deadly warrior.

When the forces of evil threatened to destroy all that he loved, Micheal, a feared and respected knight of the land, offered a bargain; the forces of darkness would let his village live in peace, and in exchange, Micheal offered his soul.  His enemies accepted, and remained true to their word.  However, they also used Micheal to further their own means, turning him into an undead wraith and forcing him to serve them.  His duty is to collect the souls of warriors who have fled their duties and bring them to his dark masters.  Those who leave innocents to die to save their own skin can expect to find the Fallen Knight hunting them down.  But Micheal grows weary of his existence, and has been known to challenge passing heroes as well, seeing if any are worthy of defeating him and freeing him from his bonds.

EDIT:  I'd started with the protagonist's stats as a starting line, and thus converted the Primes to 5/5s to make the number-moving easier.  Forgot to change them back.  Done now.

[Ethan Brooks (c)]

prime is the same as 5/5. Just so you know

[Karoku (2100)©]

prime is the same as 5/5. Just so you know

Your character is complete.

Now, to notify everyone here on Smash Power.  As long as I continue taking requests, I will for now on, stop taking request from newer members.  It can be quite a pain since this might attract guests for unnecessary reasons.  By far, members I will accept in my story in Smash Power are:

-Bryan (Hoping he makes a bio)
-Brandon (Same here^)
-Amanda (Is currently working on it)
-Sean (Has plans for one)
-Owen (Same here^)
-Mik (Hopefully, he'll post one up in time)
-ChaosBliss (Perhaps he might if it's true he'll return)
-SwimGuy (I might accept him)
-Kelly (Come on.  She is Zach's sister, after all)
-Jordan (Cool guy)
-Andy ( look forward to his entry)
-Matt (Same here ^)
-Anyone who isn't later than Bobby and SwimGuy will be accepted depending on certain reasons

SP members to work on (in order):
-Illz
-Rocky

[Skacore88]

ok im free today so ill plan on making my bio right now, and i will try to scan a picture of my character some other time.

as of right now though ill give you his name Masamune Kaito (the first name is taken from this cool character in the Samurai warriors series)


EDIT:

heres the bio


-Name: Masamune Kaito
-Social:a ronin of sorts. somewhat of a drifter
-Professional: Assassin
-Combat: stealthy
-Personality: serious, when in a battle rarely talks other than to frighten his opponents. however with those he knows he is very easygoing
-Position/side: neutral
-Nationality: Japan (although he doesn't quite look it)
-True Origin: Japan
-Sex: Male
-Orientation: Straight
-Relationships: anyone he grows accustomed to, also will form alliances to whoever he feels like/whoever pays (he is a ronin of couse)
-Avatar: Leviathan (the Sea-Serpent)
-Weapon: two scimitars held in the opposite direction (ill show in my drawing)
-Species: Human
-Favorite food: many kinds, cant decide
-Favorite Hobby: fighting, and relaxing/meditating
-Dislikes: Cruel acts to peasants and people who cant defend themselves
-Goal: to improve his powers and to help those he deems worthy
-Destined Battle: whoever interferes with his goal
-Age: 18
-Powers: mainly the use of dimensional vortexes. being able to make vortexes that only he can travel in and out of.fights sort of ninja esque and is very fast
-Stats:
  -Knowledge: 1/5 (isnt very smart but is quite tactical)
  -Power: 2/5
  -Energy: Prime
  -Stamina: 3/5
  -Charisma: 4/5
  -Dexterity: 4/5
  -Speed: Prime
  -Reaction: 4/5
  -Resistance: 3/5
  -Timing: 4/5
  -Reflexes: Prime
  -Emotional Reactions/aftermath: 4/5
^(Overall):
im confused about this part haha


mini bio-he is a drifter who travels the lands in search of work. he has fought in many past battles and has a lot of experience. masamune doesnt have all that much of a past other than he ran away from home as a child due to his parents neglect of him. he wanders the world in search of people worthy of his talents and of people he can help if they need help. he isnt allied with a single person because he doesnt care about saving the world and what not. he may randomly appear to help in some cases but not all.

Masamune often uses the vortexes he makes to appear behind enemies and attack them, then slowly walk back in to the one he came out of. he also has a signature move where he makes a bunch of vortexes in one area and then quickly shoots out of one attacking the enemy then jumps right back into another one.

he looks very mysterious because he has dark longish hair and wears very loose clothes he also doesnt appear very friendly.

[Ethan Brooks (c)]

Thanks, I like it... it's not exactly what I thought it would be, but this is great(better than I pictured it!

[SwimGuy]

You don't have to worry about me. I will not be needing one.

[Karoku (2100)©]

You don't have to worry about me. I will not be needing one.

Sure?  I was looking forward to your entry, but oh well